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Wither the yellow pine
yonder stands,
the stream sweeps
by
the field and fire, the fire still
trembling with heat
from seared pages
of pretension
passion
and foundering Liberty.

Exile sits with
a hungry jaw and the snap of cold white winter in his eyes;
the furrows
stand
in shadow upon his brows.
His head bows with
wondering
troubling thought.

And golden, stands the thin light
of Dawn
against the tree;
while the eyes of the Exile are far away dreaming
of black soil
butterflies
and Octobers past.
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:iconelvishgal2:
Oooh, i just got goosebumps...very good. it reminds me of some famous poet or other i've read, but can't think of the name right now. But jolly good, jolly good.

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You can't stop my happiness 'cause I like the way I am...so if you don't like the way I look well I just don't give a damn!

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:iconakage:
Well, thanks.

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"May there only be peaceful and cheerful Earth Days to come for our beautiful Spaceship Earth as it continues to spin and circle in frigid space with its warm and fragile cargo of animate life."

--United Nations Secretary-General U Thant
:iconears91:
Hmm.. Excellent imagery.
:iconinspirational-dreams:
I very much like the imagery you use. It really creates the picture within my head, which doesn't happen too often.

:clap: I hope to see more soon

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"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who
mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."
- Dr. Seuss


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