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A Distant Land Veiwed Closely by ~Akage:iconAkage:



I enter the library and ascend
to the second floor:
where Coleridge, Keats
and Byron have gathered in hushed conclave.

I have to remind myself
to breathe,
That no one will mind the noise.

I tiptoe in a shadowed forest
of bookcases, leaning on them, smiling,
inhaling the deep/sharp scent of pinewood
beneath dark amber varnish.

I see no one at the tables
or in other bowers,
reading beneath burning
desk lamps radiating heat

I hear
away in distant cloistered corners,
The sound of dozens of age-yellowed pages
being thumbed and dog-eared, mulled over.

The soft white fall
of crisp black words
being muttered, uttered, tested.

After miles
of shelves that groan gently like the Nautilus under pressure,
of tattered spines,
I emerge into a clearing at the edge of the room.

There are five crouching armchairs
in a semi circle
like a group of comfortable standing stones.

There are wide, dark windows
and beyond them
bright stars that twinkle and bob,
tiny beckoning will-o-wisps.

I can see the sky, the moon
is a giant white porcelain plate
chipped and smudged.

I sit down
in the shade of my imagination and devour
Emily Dickinson,
dreaming of frigates to faraway places,

Not caring if I ever come back.
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Author's Comments

This is a piece I wrote for my Narrative and Descriptive Writing class at school. I'm surprised and happy with the way it turned out, seeing as I don't normally write poetry.

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:iconeverkitsune:
oooo! I love it! its so kool!

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My age is B.
:iconbwynn:
The soft white fall
of crisp black words
being muttered, uttered, tested.


*maniacal grin* By far, my favorite lines for the whole thing. Bravo, as usual. I like how you ended it as well - I had expected a few more stanzas after reading the draft, but this was an excellent way to finish, probably the best.

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"Anyone who isn't confused already really doesn't understand the situation." ~Edward R. Murrow
:icondazzle255:
Wonderful job submitting art, Matt. :) Keep it up.

As poetry goes, it's not too shabby! The poem is certainly evocative; it's testament to your ability to use figurative language effectively.

--
Question: What do you get when you cross the Godfather with a philosopher?

Answer: An offer you can't understand.
:iconakage:
Why thank you. I originally wanted to do it in iambic pentameter or dactylic meter to give it a beat. I just couldn't get it down though. Like I say, poetry isn't my medium. ;)

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Alice: Studies show that in their lifetime, people spend an average of ten years cleaning, and only 16 hours having an orgasm.
Wendy: You know that's true! It probably would take ten years to clean up after a 16 hour orgasm.
:iconakage:
Thanks. I like the end to. It allows the reader to carry on with the journey, beyond the words; it also puts great closure to it. ;)

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Alice: Studies show that in their lifetime, people spend an average of ten years cleaning, and only 16 hours having an orgasm.
Wendy: You know that's true! It probably would take ten years to clean up after a 16 hour orgasm.
:iconears91:
Excellent Matt.
:iconelvishgal2:
Matt, this is awesome! Yay for keepin' up with the postin'! I need to put something up here myself pretty soon, I think. Anyhow, good job, it was delightful to read. I will see you when I come home, which won't be til like the 23rd, but ya, party!! woot woot!

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You can't stop my happiness 'cause I like the way I am...so if you don't like the way I look well I just don't give a damn!

:snowing: frigid
:iconarcadian-moon:
bootiful imagery! brings to mind the huge arcane libraries, with dusty books and ladders on the shelves. for someone who doesn't normally write poetry, this is a fantastic journey you've created!
:iconakage:
Thank you! I love imagery; in fact, that is one of the reasons I like your works so much!

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Alice: Studies show that in their lifetime, people spend an average of ten years cleaning, and only 16 hours having an orgasm.
Wendy: You know that's true! It probably would take ten years to clean up after a 16 hour orgasm.

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